PillowPenguinz's Reviews

[Nom Retrieval]

Decent

Your artwork is very good but your animation needs work to catch up to your full potential. you should try animating simple things (simple in the sense that you are not animating complex drawings, not simple in the sense that the animations are simple) like sketches or something, or simple drawings so that you can focus on practicing your animation skills, because your artwork is very good, and when you get better at animating, your art will look better, because it will move better.

nightshade-pheonix responds:

I agree, when I look back on projects like this I could do with some more animation-based practise... I hope to get onto it soon. Thanks for your comment :)

[When You Were Young]

Something for you guys to keep in mind:

it was ok

most of the artists need more work on their animating skills, and there is one very big and important thing that you need to know about making a flash music video like this:

NOBODY likes literal dipictions of the lyrics throughout the whole video because its stuipdi looking

please dont do that again, i liked the one with the robot and the blue/yellow background because it went well with the music but it didnt (and this is what made it a lot better than the others) it didn't just show me random pictures or animations of whatever the lyrics were saying. i hated that about a majority of them. just show me something that looks nice that fits the music.

[ANBU_Defaction]

its not bad

it was pretty funny all the characters, backdrops, etc. were drawn very nicely, but your animating needed work

[Hunted Forever]

This is great

however there is one pit that i fell into that i found extremely dificult to get out of. it is right after the 3rd or 4th upgrade station, and it was super hard to get out of and took a very long time. other than that i have no complaint

[NG review generator]

eh....

its short and boring, and i dont see how it's funny. Mayby its just that this humor isnt my type.

[Defeat the Dragon]

This is practically impossible

test it more next time you make a game, i tried three times and i cant get it under 5000 health, and thats still a lot

you need to lower the margins for the damage/heal range, and make it less impossible to win

XxFIERCE24xX responds:

keep playing the damages are all random.
You'll win eventually.

[Watery Bliss]

Pretty good loop

i like it, and i would recognize the sounds of hobnox audio tool anywhere. You should mess with the bass in that thing. you can make some pretty sick stuff with it

ScelesticFish responds:

I'll try. Thanks