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however there is one pit that i fell into that i found extremely dificult to get out of. it is right after the 3rd or 4th upgrade station, and it was super hard to get out of and took a very long time. other than that i have no complaint
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Your artwork is very good but your animation needs work to catch up to your full potential. you should try animating simple things (simple in the sense that you are not animating complex drawings, not simple in the sense that the animations are simple) like sketches or something, or simple drawings so that you can focus on practicing your animation skills, because your artwork is very good, and when you get better at animating, your art will look better, because it will move better.
Author's Response:
I agree, when I look back on projects like this I could do with some more animation-based practise... I hope to get onto it soon. Thanks for your comment :)
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its short and boring, and i dont see how it's funny. Mayby its just that this humor isnt my type.
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"Something for you guys to keep in mind:"
it was ok
most of the artists need more work on their animating skills, and there is one very big and important thing that you need to know about making a flash music video like this:
NOBODY likes literal dipictions of the lyrics throughout the whole video because its stuipdi looking
please dont do that again, i liked the one with the robot and the blue/yellow background because it went well with the music but it didnt (and this is what made it a lot better than the others) it didn't just show me random pictures or animations of whatever the lyrics were saying. i hated that about a majority of them. just show me something that looks nice that fits the music.
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test it more next time you make a game, i tried three times and i cant get it under 5000 health, and thats still a lot
you need to lower the margins for the damage/heal range, and make it less impossible to win
Author's Response:
keep playing the damages are all random.
You'll win eventually.
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it was pretty funny all the characters, backdrops, etc. were drawn very nicely, but your animating needed work
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you dont die when your health runs out. cant wait for the rest
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after a while it just kept being yellow
it never changed
good game tho
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"Like I said so many times before :"
you need to stop using the original as a template.
you can say watever the fuck you want, why does everyone find it neccecary to do the same shit over and over again. its a really good concept and i looked forward to seeing different ideas from people and i was very dissapointed when all i saw was people doing the same shit over and over again, except much worse
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you did wat everyone does, you used allen awesome's flash as a template. almost all of these start with saying who the peson is and what their level is, then a little about themselves, then their 2 favorite flashes, then a lot of them end there, but then a lot of them do a hand thing similar to allen awesomes, then they end it. these are very open ended and im tired of seeing everyones exact copies of the original
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